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After the Rainbow

after the rainbow
its lingering absence---
her eyes so blank

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Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 5/16/2012 5:49:00 AM

whoah! a great heartfelt poetry! it deserves a round of applause!!! good luck for the contest! =) smile

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 5/14/2012 4:13:00 PM

very nice haiku Kash....smiles....chiquita

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/14/2012 6:46:00 AM

can almost see the pain...Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2012 2:13:00 AM

sent you soupy, kashi... got more first-rate poems??.:) huggs !

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/14/2012 12:16:00 AM

thanks for the haiku comment on my haiku/senryu post ... lol.. Gave me a smile and hey this gem above goes to my favourites... Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2012 10:19:00 PM

Hey, kash, it must be morning time where you are? I am finally getting off here. Spent half my day with the kids. It was very nice!!

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/13/2012 4:41:00 PM

To me this reads a woman who loved through all the colors of love and then lost the feeling and loved no more. I hope I have it right. Huggs TLee

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/13/2012 4:42:00 PM

I wrote a poem called The Colors of Love.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/13/2012 4:12:00 PM

That's just the way I viewed your poem...may not be very accurate...sorry if I offended you in my interpretation.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/13/2012 4:09:00 PM

What a way to break the heart of someone you so loved at one time! Very fantastic way of describing this event Kash! Great Work!!

John Freeman

Date: 5/13/2012 3:23:00 PM

In the absence of brilliance of beauty, nice finish. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/13/2012 3:15:00 PM

What a stunning light!....what else could be more beautiful than roy g biv?...Hey, re: your comments on my gladiator poem...it just goes to show how peaceful a person you are that raising the bar for more graphic violence for a higher placement would bother you...I have to agree that I too am a peaceful person...I believe you can demonstrate violence in other ways and keep the gore to a minimum. I haven't read but one or two entries and they were tastefully crafted... Gwendolen