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after the rainbow

after the rainbow its lingering absence--- her eyes so blank

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/16/2012 5:49:00 AM
whoah! a great heartfelt poetry! it deserves a round of applause!!! good luck for the contest! =) smile
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Date: 5/14/2012 4:13:00 PM
very nice haiku Kash....smiles....chiquita
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:46:00 AM
can almost see the pain...Light & Love
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Date: 5/14/2012 2:13:00 AM
sent you soupy, kashi... got more first-rate poems??.:) huggs !
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Date: 5/14/2012 12:16:00 AM
thanks for the haiku comment on my haiku/senryu post ... lol.. Gave me a smile and hey this gem above goes to my favourites... Charma
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:19:00 PM
Hey, kash, it must be morning time where you are? I am finally getting off here. Spent half my day with the kids. It was very nice!!
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Date: 5/13/2012 4:41:00 PM
To me this reads a woman who loved through all the colors of love and then lost the feeling and loved no more. I hope I have it right. Huggs TLee
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/13/2012 4:42:00 PM
I wrote a poem called The Colors of Love.
Date: 5/13/2012 4:12:00 PM
That's just the way I viewed your poem...may not be very accurate...sorry if I offended you in my interpretation.
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Date: 5/13/2012 4:09:00 PM
What a way to break the heart of someone you so loved at one time! Very fantastic way of describing this event Kash! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/13/2012 3:23:00 PM
In the absence of brilliance of beauty, nice finish. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/13/2012 3:15:00 PM
What a stunning light!....what else could be more beautiful than roy g biv?...Hey, re: your comments on my gladiator poem...it just goes to show how peaceful a person you are that raising the bar for more graphic violence for a higher placement would bother you...I have to agree that I too am a peaceful person...I believe you can demonstrate violence in other ways and keep the gore to a minimum. I haven't read but one or two entries and they were tastefully crafted... Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:22:00 PM
wonderful Kash, a beauty this is.
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Date: 5/13/2012 2:20:00 PM
The specialist have said it and it so well, like always ! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:19:00 AM
I think this is what I saw on Facebook and I still love it!
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Date: 5/13/2012 8:35:00 AM
kash how do you come up with them, just excellent, serious...David
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Date: 5/13/2012 8:09:00 AM
ahhha, first to read you.. awwwight!..:)
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Date: 5/13/2012 8:08:00 AM
ohhh, this one is done brightly with much meaning, kashi.. go for the win!..:) hugggs!
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