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After the Rain

god smiles on the earth
behold a lovely rainbow
kids jump in puddles

02~27~17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

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March 14, 2017 at 3:57 PM

I love this! A warm and fussy happy feeling it creates, warm regards, Laura

March 7, 2017 at 3:02 AM

Let it rain Jan... let it rain...

March 6, 2017 at 10:44 AM

This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

March 4, 2017 at 8:10 AM

I agree with Daniel. I love to go out with my kids and splash through the puddles and walk through tall grass fields after a good rain. great Haiku!

March 4, 2017 at 1:24 PM

Thanks Jesse:-) I also love the fresh smell of the damp earth after a rain shower:-) hugs Jan xx

February 28, 2017 at 11:13 AM

that's just a feel good Jan, thanks...

March 1, 2017 at 1:01 PM

Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

February 28, 2017 at 8:53 AM

Adults too, sometimes:) Nice one, Jan:)

March 1, 2017 at 1:02 PM

Definitely adults too lol:-) I also love kicking up leaves in autumn:-) hugs jan xx

February 28, 2017 at 2:14 AM

What a lovely day you describe in so few words, hugs

March 1, 2017 at 1:02 PM

Thanks Tahira:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 27, 2017 at 5:35 PM

Uplifting as the day tomorrow will be dearest Jan! Hugsxxx

February 27, 2017 at 5:37 PM

ha ha ha mine will be squashed not uplifted lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 27, 2017 at 2:04 PM

- I've bought new wellington boots today .... yippee !!! - Lovely haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

February 27, 2017 at 2:06 PM

Get out and jump in the puddles lol:-) hugs Jan xx

February 27, 2017 at 1:36 PM

Sounds like a lovely spring day.. all kids love to splash in the puddles

February 27, 2017 at 1:37 PM

I love to see rainbows - they are like an upside-down smile from heaven:-) hugs Jan xx

February 27, 2017 at 1:04 PM

What an uplifting entry. The form is true to count and voice. The theme is adorable. Well done

February 27, 2017 at 1:08 PM

Thanks Lisa just a fun write after I saw a rainbow today:-) hugs Jan xx

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