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god smiles on the earth behold a lovely rainbow kids jump in puddles 02~27~17

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Date: 3/14/2017 3:57:00 PM
I love this! A warm and fussy happy feeling it creates, warm regards, Laura
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:02:00 AM
Let it rain Jan... let it rain...
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:44:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
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Date: 3/4/2017 8:10:00 AM
I agree with Daniel. I love to go out with my kids and splash through the puddles and walk through tall grass fields after a good rain. great Haiku!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/4/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Jesse:-) I also love the fresh smell of the damp earth after a rain shower:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/28/2017 11:13:00 AM
that's just a feel good Jan, thanks...
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Date: 3/1/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/28/2017 2:14:00 AM
What a lovely day you describe in so few words, hugs
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Date: 3/1/2017 1:02:00 PM
Thanks Tahira:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 5:35:00 PM
Uplifting as the day tomorrow will be dearest Jan! Hugsxxx
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Date: 2/27/2017 5:37:00 PM
ha ha ha mine will be squashed not uplifted lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 3:13:00 PM
Ah, the words come together well here. I love to splash a puddle as well.
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Date: 2/27/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Ray seem to have our fair share of rough weather recently:-( but when i see a rainbow it makes me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 2:04:00 PM
- I've bought new wellington boots today .... yippee !!! - Lovely haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2017 2:06:00 PM
Get out and jump in the puddles lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 1:36:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely spring day.. all kids love to splash in the puddles
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Date: 2/27/2017 1:37:00 PM
I love to see rainbows - they are like an upside-down smile from heaven:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/27/2017 1:04:00 PM
What an uplifting entry. The form is true to count and voice. The theme is adorable. Well done
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Date: 2/27/2017 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Lisa just a fun write after I saw a rainbow today:-) hugs Jan xx