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After the party, I woke up on a tropical island Poetry Contest .
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Cutting the Deck Star filled sky Alive, energy, vibrating night Enriching sound of the waves Feeling the wind on a voyage to another world Listening to the hottest DJs spinning Top dynamics of music I strolled up to deck for a little dancing Hoping for a little love Showing off dexterous, super-spreader swing moves Picking a few Dark and Stormy at the bar Happy with the harmony Feeling the rhythm like prince charming Wanting to accommodate one Connect on the dance floor Midst a group of attractive, Very desirable, crazy ladies Like a beast killing the tempo moves Ladies dissipated Disappointed Ignored Out of breath with sweat streaming down my face Nimble-fingered, clumsy Knocked out Flew over the deck rail into the cold Woke up on a tropical island Perplexed, no memory decided to stay 6/18/2024

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Date: 7/30/2024 12:15:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Island write again. Guess we can have some island fun Hooray!!!  Hahaha!!!! Have a very fun day writing away...........
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Date: 6/19/2024 9:00:00 AM
Dear Eve, Okay, you swept me away like a midnight breeze. I could see that star-filled sky, that pulsating energy. And did I mention the waves’. It all felt to me like a voyage to another world. In other words I danced, hoping for love, but ended up knocked out, waking on a tropical island. (LOL) Your words linger with me. - Good Luck in the Contest. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/18/2024 12:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun Island write. So you are staying??? Can I join you??? Hahaha!!! Have a great/blessed day writing away............
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/18/2024 3:09:00 PM
You sure may at least I won’t be lonely.
Date: 6/18/2024 11:33:00 AM
Engaging so imaginative had me interested and curious.
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