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After the party, i woke up on a tropical island

After the party, i woke up on a tropical island I was with three new friends in Manaus, We drunk, on, two, three Caipirhina, Brazilian booze, I couldn’t stop thinking about a Brazilian girl in France, Have you ever drink four Caipirhina, in the jungle? Walking back to our little dirty hotel at midnight, We were singing and dancing in the deserted streets, I remember a driver trying to run us over at green light, That is what Saturdays look like in Manaus nights, When I woke up, I really was in the virgin forest, Multicolored birds were singing loud everywhere, M hammock, was deep and comfortable like wool, Later at noon, we were eating cooked piranhas, A blue and yellow Ara Parrot, enjoyed our company, When I Woke up, I really was in the virgin forest, Ten blue and yellow Ara parrots were making conversation, The girl I was thinking about became my loved wife

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Date: 8/8/2024 3:11:00 PM
Your engaging story is so interesting, colorful and lovely, Yann. The ending was nice. Well composed.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/8/2024 9:55:00 PM
thnaks evelyn for the kind and supportive words, have a nice week end
Date: 6/21/2024 12:48:00 AM
Good story. Well composed. I noticed your all the poems belong to Free Verse. Why not trying other forms ? Blessings
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/8/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thanks anisha so much, i take care of your advice, but in english it is so difficult to find rhymes,, my first language is french and it doesn't work with translating ave a nice week end
Date: 6/18/2024 6:26:00 PM
Had a good ending, good for you... liked the part about the parrots making conversation too :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/8/2024 9:58:00 PM
thanks Paige, for stopping by yann
Date: 6/18/2024 9:47:00 AM
You have told a wonderful story my friend.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/18/2024 4:09:00 PM
thank you so much Jerry for commenting
Date: 6/18/2024 2:16:00 AM
A lovely ending to a fantasy poem. Wish I visited a tropical island.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/18/2024 4:12:00 PM
tha, you victor, my Best souvenir was Lamu , a city in Ocean Indian, it was not an island, but so isolated, it looked like enjoyed your comment
Date: 6/17/2024 8:57:00 PM
Quite an interesting experience... ! Liquor can lift one to magical realms and experiences. Enjoyed your poem, dear Yaan
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/18/2024 4:13:00 PM
thank you Valsa, for stopping by with an nteresting comment, liquor is a country i guess for so much
Date: 6/17/2024 11:22:00 AM
Later at noon, we were eating cooked piranhas…great humor, Yann! The dream girl became your wife :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/18/2024 4:14:00 PM
thanks for the delicious comment KIm
Date: 6/17/2024 10:44:00 AM
This is quite imaginative and you've told a great story here...
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/18/2024 4:15:00 PM
Thanks So for your kind support
Date: 6/17/2024 8:42:00 AM
So interesting. I take it you were already on this island but you just went farther into thr forest. Nicely done,Yann.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/18/2024 4:15:00 PM
thank you so much Andrea for the kind comment

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