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For: After the party, I woke up on a tropical island Poetry Contest
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After the Party

After the party
I woke up
on a tropical island,
it was such
a nice scene,
until I realized
that what 
I was seeing
was my own 
shower curtain 
in the room where
I passed out
after hugging
the toilet bowl 
and puking!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 10:50 PM
A poem that is 'to the point'. It could have been alcohol, though I've noticed that crowded parties with lots of people, always seems to have one who is carrying the flu. I hope recovery was speedy.
Brotherton Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 7:46 PM
Very creative and quite humorous, my friend.
Achara Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 8:34 PM
Based on a true story ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 7:16 PM
I nearly feel dizzy… Good write.
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