After the Party

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For: After the party, I woke up on a tropical island Poetry Contest
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After the party
I woke up
on a tropical island,
it was such
a nice scene,
until I realized
that what 
I was seeing
was my own 
shower curtain 
in the room where
I passed out
after hugging
the toilet bowl 
and puking!

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/1/2024 10:50:00 PM

A poem that is 'to the point'. It could have been alcohol, though I've noticed that crowded parties with lots of people, always seems to have one who is carrying the flu. I hope recovery was speedy.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 6/1/2024 7:46:00 PM

Very creative and quite humorous, my friend.

Chetta Achara
Date: 6/1/2024 8:34:00 PM

Based on a true story ;-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/31/2024 7:16:00 PM

I nearly feel dizzy… Good write.