After the Love Affair

WHISPERING TO EACH OTHER

‘I LOVE YOU’
She knew there was no more time
Soft Sweet kisses
In the mirrored of pirouette
Arms so strong
Oh how wonderful to be held
And the opening of their eyes
To see....

Die a thousand
Deaths
Of the last of the looks to be
With Each drop of HER
Is given to the memory
Of HIM....

To try to put out the
Fires of their shimmering lives;
Received by grace
Of a sweet melody
With the passion of the moment
Was it never meant to be?
The flesh shall be given
And to behold this blessed day
With breathe as sweet as daises
And the touch of their hearts
Where his hand will lead
Her soul will follow...

Where all their paths are praise worthy
And the treasures are buried in the precious pearls of
Life;
The pleasure most pleasing to her
In his strong face and loving
Eyes;....

The sunrise upon their nights
Are missed with her life
Please hold me she begs
From afar
So this love affair is no more
So near.....

To give their love as in heavens
But to be reborn
Where the sky lowers
To see the secrets revealed.
To be, she says.....

AFTER THE LOVE AFFAIR;

Brooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/7/2014 6:54:00 PM
This work has a soft brilliance to it that i enjoyed it a lot, well done. cheri glad you enjoyed my Alamo so much thank you for your great comment take care of yourself have a wonderful night.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 8:26:00 PM
THANK YOU CHERI... hugs
Date: 5/7/2014 3:38:00 PM
This feels like a sad lullaby. A very moving piece of writing.
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Date: 5/7/2014 1:22:00 PM
Hi Brooke, My friend this is very very good!! APPLAUSE~ Thank you for this beauty! Peace, Deborah
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Deborah.. you a re so kind
Date: 5/7/2014 12:31:00 PM
Sweet and simple.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Sharon
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