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After the Hurricane

The sun illuminates where former smile, a crimson sunset into the crypsis fades. Optical illusion - boat upside- down, sails sullied, the upheaval of grit. My sight ebbs and flows, a buoy beholds the odd. I grasp the folds of skittered skirt, hang on tight, my fishing shock strength reeling. My black and blue breath, a sturgeon gasping. Funny how the ocean tides seem so calm… The wicked wretch is two-faced, a liar. I’d bask in her embryonic fluid — she can roll you like a reptile, scar you for life. Still like a siren, she calls me, my hair drying from her sin, her music beckons, shimmering waves prod, “C’mon in.” I dare to turn my back on my island. But a child’s palm nestles into my world, my heart sinks in vertigo — I let go. I begin to turn over hapless beach, finding cockleshells with wet hands and feet.

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Date: 11/23/2020 10:37:00 AM
fantastic free verse, Kim. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2020 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 11/23/2020 12:38:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me sense "The wicked wretch is two-faced, a liar" while letting me thanks the Prince of peace, our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ Who can calm every hurricane in our lives. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2020 2:42:00 AM
God bless you, Beata! Thank you!
Date: 11/22/2020 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "The wicked wretch is two-faced, a liar." So true. Hurricanes cannot be trusted. Enjoy your wonderful win..........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 11/21/2020 8:58:00 AM
Kim, your images are amazing - like waves rolling in on after another! Love the personification of the fickle nature of the ocean - friend and foe. Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings of calm waters and clear skies!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2020 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! :)
Date: 11/21/2020 8:58:00 AM
Ah, the little child that brings one back to reality! Beautiful shaping of scene, desire and emotions regarding the many wonders and terrors of the sea, Kim. You know how to string the words together just so...a fave for me! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2020 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura!
Date: 11/20/2020 9:35:00 PM
Beautiful flowing with great imagery and emotion. Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2020 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 10/29/2020 4:13:00 AM
The ocean is two-faced, especially in the throes of a hurricane. This is a winning poem if I've ever read one, Kim, and I certainly have!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 10/27/2020 5:16:00 PM
This is such a window to a mind's workings. Brilliantly penned, Kim. Here's to a big winner in the contest! Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 5:34:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon! :)
Date: 10/27/2020 6:17:00 AM
We have a saying that the sea has a soft belly but a hard head. Very descriptive and emotional poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 10/27/2020 6:08:00 AM
My black and blue breath, wow Kim! incredible surreal, where are you channeling such words and imagery from, your tapping into the subconscious Very impressive an authority, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thanks, David! I listen to the sea... <3
Date: 10/27/2020 5:55:00 AM
The imagery in the first stanza is brilliant..This poem is full of emotion and one of the best, I have read for this contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim

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