After the Hurricane

The sun illuminates where former smile,
a crimson sunset into the crypsis
fades. Optical illusion - boat upside-
down, sails sullied, the upheaval of grit.

My sight ebbs and flows, a buoy beholds
the odd. I grasp the folds of skittered skirt,
hang on tight, my fishing shock strength reeling.
My black and blue breath, a sturgeon gasping.

Funny how the ocean tides seem so calm…
The wicked wretch is two-faced, a liar.
I’d bask in her embryonic fluid —
she can roll you like a reptile, scar you

for life. Still like a siren, she calls me,
my hair drying from her sin, her music
beckons, shimmering waves prod, “C’mon in.”
I dare to turn my back on my island.

But a child’s palm nestles into my world,
my heart sinks in vertigo — I let go.
I begin to turn over hapless beach,
finding cockleshells with wet hands and feet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:37 AM
fantastic free verse, Kim. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Agustin Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 12:38 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me sense "The wicked wretch is two-faced, a liar" while letting me thanks the Prince of peace, our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ Who can calm every hurricane in our lives. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 2:42 AM
God bless you, Beata! Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "The wicked wretch is two-faced, a liar." So true. Hurricanes cannot be trusted. Enjoy your wonderful win..........
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Leiser Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Ah, the little child that brings one back to reality! Beautiful shaping of scene, desire and emotions regarding the many wonders and terrors of the sea, Kim. You know how to string the words together just so...a fave for me! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Thank you so much, Laura!
Kauffman Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Kim, your images are amazing - like waves rolling in on after another! Love the personification of the fickle nature of the ocean - friend and foe. Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings of calm waters and clear skies!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, Sam! :)
Roper Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Beautiful flowing with great imagery and emotion. Congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 4:13 AM
The ocean is two-faced, especially in the throes of a hurricane. This is a winning poem if I've ever read one, Kim, and I certainly have!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much!!
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:16 PM
This is such a window to a mind's workings. Brilliantly penned, Kim. Here's to a big winner in the contest! Cheers, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Thanks, Gershon! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:17 AM
We have a saying that the sea has a soft belly but a hard head. Very descriptive and emotional poem. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:08 AM
My black and blue breath, wow Kim! incredible surreal, where are you channeling such words and imagery from, your tapping into the subconscious Very impressive an authority, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thanks, David! I listen to the sea... <3
One Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:55 AM
The imagery in the first stanza is brilliant..This poem is full of emotion and one of the best, I have read for this contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim
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