After the Fling

Our love was fleeting, like a cloudy moon,
and when it ended, I kept asking why
you stole my heart, then said goodbye so soon.
I lose myself in memories and cry.
You said you cared, but clearly that's a lie,
and if I ask to talk, you only sigh.
So if I said I need you, would you laugh?
I'm sure, that is exactly what you'd do!
My tearful eyes can't see your photograph,
and all I want to do is dream of you:
the day when you return to love me too,
and then at last your feelings will be true.
You never told me why you turned so cold.
My mind replays the scene that fateful day:
you wouldn't kiss me, wouldn't let me hold
your hand, I couldn't figure what to say,
and numb with shock, I watched you walk away.
Too late, I thought of begging you to stay.
I wanted you to be there all my life,
and knowing you're with him, just twists the knife.

written 27th May 2019, for Emile Pinet's Urban sonnet contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Canama Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 9:29 AM
The story behind this poem is heartrending. Stay cool and hopeful!
Kulkarni Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:20 PM
Such a beautiful and touching poem Jack! Stay well! -Smita
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 7:10 PM
A perfect ending to your beautifully composed poem Jack. Congratulations on your top win! : )
Allison Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 4:51 AM
such a sad sonnet Jack and sadly one that many can relate to:-( hugs Jan xx
Ravidas Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Perfect silver, Jack. Congrats)
Cozart Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Beautifully metered, Jack. Congrats on your fine win.
Pinet Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations Jack! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge because I was very strict on Rhyming, well done my friend, Emile.
Proxenos Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 12:01 PM
A sad poem of love that is not returned. To think of her with him is just like twisting a knife in you. Made me cry! Hugs, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Love triangles are doomed to end in pain and heartache, Jack! Your lovely sonnet is very emotional. Regards // paul
Sergi Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Hi Andrea: A mournful poem that evokes sadness. I wish you well in the contest.
Sergi Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:29 AM
SORRY, JACK! I'M COMMENTING ON TOO MANY POETS!
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page ..Sara
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May 27, 2019 at 5:28 PM
A fave for me.
Devonshire Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Such a sad sonnet, Jack. Guess most of us have experienced the feeling of rejection, but few can express it so powerfully. You write beautifully in this form! Hugs, Carolyn
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May 27, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Wow. This is so sad; it sounds like this brush off was sudden and unexpected, the worst kind. When you are in shock it is difficult to do what you could have done pre-shock. Good luck in the contest.
Shaw Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:18 PM
A very touching melancholy poem, nicely written Jack and I wish you good luck in the contest, kindest regards, Kevin
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