After the Fling

Our love was fleeting, like a cloudy moon,
and when it ended, I kept asking why
you stole my heart, then said goodbye so soon.
I lose myself in memories and cry.
You said you cared, but clearly that's a lie,
and if I ask to talk, you only sigh.
So if I said I need you, would you laugh?
I'm sure, that is exactly what you'd do!
My tearful eyes can't see your photograph,
and all I want to do is dream of you:
the day when you return to love me too,
and then at last your feelings will be true.
You never told me why you turned so cold.
My mind replays the scene that fateful day:
you wouldn't kiss me, wouldn't let me hold
your hand, I couldn't figure what to say,
and numb with shock, I watched you walk away.
Too late, I thought of begging you to stay.
I wanted you to be there all my life,
and knowing you're with him, just twists the knife.

written 27th May 2019, for Emile Pinet's Urban sonnet contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 6/20/2019 9:29:00 AM
The story behind this poem is heartrending. Stay cool and hopeful!
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Date: 6/12/2019 1:20:00 PM
Such a beautiful and touching poem Jack! Stay well! -Smita
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Date: 6/1/2019 7:10:00 PM
A perfect ending to your beautifully composed poem Jack. Congratulations on your top win! : )
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:51:00 AM
such a sad sonnet Jack and sadly one that many can relate to:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/31/2019 2:53:00 PM
Perfect silver, Jack. Congrats)
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Date: 5/31/2019 2:33:00 PM
Beautifully metered, Jack. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 5/31/2019 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations Jack! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge because I was very strict on Rhyming, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 5/28/2019 12:01:00 PM
A sad poem of love that is not returned. To think of her with him is just like twisting a knife in you. Made me cry! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/28/2019 10:17:00 AM
Love triangles are doomed to end in pain and heartache, Jack! Your lovely sonnet is very emotional. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/28/2019 8:27:00 AM
Hi Andrea: A mournful poem that evokes sadness. I wish you well in the contest.
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Date: 5/28/2019 8:29:00 AM
SORRY, JACK! I'M COMMENTING ON TOO MANY POETS!
Date: 5/27/2019 6:33:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page ..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2019 5:28:00 PM
A fave for me.
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Date: 5/27/2019 5:27:00 PM
Such a sad sonnet, Jack. Guess most of us have experienced the feeling of rejection, but few can express it so powerfully. You write beautifully in this form! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2019 4:39:00 PM
Wow. This is so sad; it sounds like this brush off was sudden and unexpected, the worst kind. When you are in shock it is difficult to do what you could have done pre-shock. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/27/2019 3:18:00 PM
A very touching melancholy poem, nicely written Jack and I wish you good luck in the contest, kindest regards, Kevin
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