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After the Fall


After the ash plume
In devastation surround
Regeneration




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Jayne Eggins

June 6, 2010 at 6:48 AM

I seem to be drawn to your winners today lol congrates again ... great images with this one in so few lines Love Jayne x x x

Barbara Gorelick

April 18, 2010 at 3:44 PM

Good one James..congrats on your success in the contest. Glad Im not in Iceland right now with their ash plum.. BG soup mail

Kim M

April 17, 2010 at 8:34 PM

I saw your name on this contest's winner's list. Congratulations ...again!

Audrey Haick

April 17, 2010 at 2:22 PM

Congratulations, James! Great imagery here! Enjoy...Hope you and family are having a great weekend! And thank you for readng my poems and leaving, always, kind comments...Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 17, 2010 at 2:13 PM

Congrats Highlander on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. amazing words for the photo and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2010 at 1:11 PM

Congratulations on your success in the contest, James! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

April 17, 2010 at 12:56 PM

An excellent description of the photo in Raul's contest, James....Congratulations on your placement which is so well deserved!! Love, Carrie

Raul Moreno

April 17, 2010 at 12:06 PM

James, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Colleen Bono

April 17, 2010 at 9:14 AM

so much said in so few words.Hope you have a great day.

Mary Meade Stephenson

April 17, 2010 at 8:57 AM

This James is a wonderful haiku and paints the clear pic of what can happen/will happen after a volcanic eruption. Love the hopeful attitude you have with just one word. Powerful!Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Hope you have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

April 17, 2010 at 5:17 AM

Exelent write my friend but all your work is great wrote a new one would love to have your opinion on it hell running pubs kinda takes away from my work im probaly losing my touch let me know if ya would cheers

Iolanda Scripca

April 16, 2010 at 10:52 PM

Very original Haiku describing the picture Raul provided. Good luck in his contest. All the very best, Iolanda

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 16, 2010 at 10:17 PM

A nice fitting haiku

Carolyn Devonshire

April 16, 2010 at 7:16 PM

Hope and new life springs from the devastation. Well done, James! Love, Carolyn

April 16, 2010 at 6:26 PM

Give a sense of hope that I like. Interesting perspective. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Karen

Sara Kendrick

April 16, 2010 at 5:23 PM

Interesting write in this one....I wonder if in response to the volcano eruption in Iceland? Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

April 16, 2010 at 12:56 PM

I enjoyed this Haiku..and i love how it endsin Regeneration..Charma

Kim M

April 16, 2010 at 9:41 AM

Oh! How vividly I see this scene! Outstanding haiku, James. (I'm catching up in my reading of your book of poetry. ...By the way, thanks for being such a supportive friend.)