Notes About The Poem

"Some moments arrive
only after they have
already left and
the stakes are epistemic and
ontological

can the poem begin?"

- Poet

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after the downbeat: -an ars poetica-

upon waking
no upon the waking
this waking neither first nor last

cold floor
a warm bulb shivers

the alley cat
still feral
counting its own lives
already half made of sound
arriving before it arrives

casts what your february
in its orange persistence
cast before

the hour of the lamp
is standing without you

one thought
and the thought that will not come

something there
has sunk its canines into
the syllables
your syllables
syllabub curdled
frothing

the syllabus
your mother birthed you with
wet and new
red-ink margins

not rehearsing them
no never rehearsing
conducting them slowly
as an orchestra pit must

when all the musicians have gone home
dry and gone

and no one answers the downbeat
and no one
and no one

two   three   four

the downbeat has no one left to strike

you lift your hand

the cat walks out of the sound it made
already elsewhere
leaving where it will return
leaving before it has left
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Maverick Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 11:34 PM
Very precient Daniel..A cat-tivaing piece To read.' P indeed.)
Anaya Avatar
February 2, 2026 at 9:31 PM
I'm enjoying on Groundhogs Day. Playful & echoing, similes open to many interpretations. The cat is itself & nothing more, curious & uninterested all at once! Keep warm in the winter storm, Daniel~
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:38 AM
Dear Anaya, I think a poem should sometimes prompt readers to ponder its meanings and applications, and I appreciate you for writing for a deeper meaning and for being willing to tackle my musings. Winter Blessings, Anaya, Daniel
Onclaud Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 9:37 AM
definitely visceral with a sense of foreboding, daniel!
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:35 AM
Dear Nette, thank you and I think when writing this way it helps me to process the world in various ways. Winter Blessings, Nette, Daniel
Bayles Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 7:35 AM
Haunting and delightful, Daniel.
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:34 AM
Hello Mike, thank you my friend. Winter Blessings, Mike, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 5:58 PM
Mystical and wonderful, Daniel
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:34 AM
Dear Andrea, I know my family would not like reading this kind of poetry, but my poetry family is, and thank you for being part of it. Winter Blessings, Andrea, Daniel
May Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 3:54 PM
You describe the somber image well Daaniel, Blessings
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:32 AM
Hello Joe, thank you for coming by and reading. Winter Blessings, Joe, Daniel
Hind Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 6:28 PM
Amazing writing, Daniel. Such raw talent ability- your work always requires so much depth that you put into it.
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:32 AM
Dear Paige, I think it is my philosophical brain on overload with a dash of psychology. Thank you, my friend. Winter Blessings, Dear Paige, Daniel
Beaufort Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 4:05 PM
Daniel, if I thought I could orchestrate events with confidence, this would make me think twice (or more). This questions our perception of time and reality. Reminds me of a sci-fi episode where someone's stuck in a time loop! Smiles!!!
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:30 AM
Hello Duke, I have always been a fan of The Twilight Zone, The Outer Limits, etc., and, as a young boy, I would think about how I could write this way. I guess this is my way of doing that. Thanks, my friend. Winter Blessings, Duke, Daniel
Roper Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 9:40 AM
I like the illusion in your poem of achievement. finally, the cat secures a place. Enjoyed reading your poem. Eve
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:27 AM
Dear Eve, thank you for contemplating my poem. I know that philosophical thought is not everyone's thing. Winter Blessings, Eve, Daniel
Godwin Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 9:39 AM
Oh, Daniel, what have you created? Requires / deserves multiple reads and even then, we could hold an hour-long class to study it. You've squeezed my brain, you have and I'm just going to read it one more time. Very abstract, to me, yet there's something tangible here.
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Dear CayCay, As my wife tells me, when I start discussing philosophy, psychology, or theology, it gives her a headache. Sometimes, my brain slips into a deep state that I fear it might not return from. Thanks for taking the time to ponder. Winter Blessings, Dear CayCay, Daniel
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