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After the Dance

After the dance was over Not a hostile takeover ~~ Lights dim, an empty floor Club open no more, I took her home to bed Of course, we were wed! Written March 10, 2022

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 2:17:00 PM

Great write, Milton. Somehow, someway- you brought me back to my rendezvous years (lol). Love your ending. Hope all is well!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2022 2:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie. I am so glad to see you back here at PS. I missed you. Your comments mean a lot to me!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/14/2022 10:26:00 AM

I gave a sigh of relief when I got to the ending.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/14/2022 11:20:00 AM

(chuckling) I did, too. I had this poem written, but it was a long time before I decided to post it.