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After the Cold Rush

So we've come to a truce, love? We sing sad songs together while he accompanies. A room filled with melodies and memories of you The best of sorrow and joy. Love is bigger than we ever imagined. I guess we really can be so happy together...

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Date: 10/23/2017 9:14:00 PM
This is well hilarious, creative, and well for some poor soul sad. I loved the write , a fav!
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Date: 10/25/2017 11:18:00 AM
Hey Arturo! Thanks for stopping by the zoo. Yep, was making singalong music with the ex and my husband-in-law when this popped out. More fun than mickey mouse pancakes. Cheers amigo!
Date: 10/23/2017 8:52:00 PM
Oh, you and love will make special memories..., John,, Hugs eve ~`*
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Date: 10/25/2017 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Eve. We did and we do!
Date: 10/22/2017 8:29:00 PM
Interesting and creative write John; thanks for reading my Frank Marriage Woes poem!~Che :)
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Date: 10/25/2017 11:16:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by cheryl. This a marriage gone wrong PO, so similar to Franky;-) Cheerios! ~ j
Date: 10/22/2017 4:16:00 PM
very creative, john! i like the way you've written this - made me read it a few times! cool!
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Date: 10/25/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thanks ilene. Cool works for this old fool;-)

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