After Reading Some Chinese Poetry

Wandering freely,
Cheerfully pacing the void,
Coming and going --
Even candles in the wind
Briefly shed light on the path.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 2, 2008 at 9:29 AM
Very nice Tanka, Jim :) I really enjoy the read Dorian
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