After Hours Time

my favorite time

just sitting and watching you

prepare for your day

a routine that's never old

outfit on , unwrapped for night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 22, 2010 at 3:37 PM
She sounds like a lucky lady to have such eyes dwell on her.. enjoyed your poem Michael, let me see how wonderful the writes get,..p.d.
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December 19, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Super write Michael.. a great Tanka ..u have now mastered this form so well with all the luv connotations and lines... enjoyed my W.K. ..your J.G. forever and always with luv.
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December 19, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Thoughtful and tantalising Tanka Michael, will there be a follow up? >> James :)
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December 19, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Leaving the rest of what happens to the reader to interpret in his or her own way.. Enjoyed your Tanka Mr. F ;) Hope your weekend's been a great one thus far.. blessings Wilma
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