Brenda Atry Poet Free verse

After Dieting

After Dieting


Me, finally free
I’ve untied my hands
And let them explore
Greedily

Soft and rigid 
Hard and pliable
Textures and smoothness,  
Merge

Grabbing a succulent treat
My fingers  grip
The lurid wrapper
Twist

I shovel the chocolate devil
Through parted lips
Madness consume me
A.D.


For Dahlink D Guzzo's contest

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Funom Makama June 11, 2012 at 4:16 AM This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Nancy Jones September 25, 2011 at 2:16 PM hehe! I'd say more but I think my refrigerator is calling me :) Happy day~N

Debbie Guzzi September 10, 2011 at 2:41 PM ohhh yeah I just bought 2 expensive dark chocolate bars...mmm I allow myself a square every now and then! I have missed you! Where are you? light & love

Nette Onclaud September 6, 2011 at 3:41 PM big cheers on your happy win, brenda..:) huggs

Kash Poet August 25, 2011 at 9:18 AM You have chosen an interesting theme to write on Brenda...Congrats on your HM.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 4:11 PM Congrats Brenda on your HM in the contest for excellent poetry luv.. enjoy honor so special..

Carol Sunshine Brown August 23, 2011 at 2:17 PM Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "AC DC AD BC" contest Brenda. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick August 23, 2011 at 2:09 PM Congrats on your win in this fine contest...Sara

David Williams August 23, 2011 at 12:29 PM hey Brenda, congrats on your win David