After a Storm

The day after a storm shades the skies in blackness, shoutings of rain subside in the blueness of day where puffy clouds reside. The day after a storm quenches the scorched, sere earth, clamor of birds is heard – a chaotic chorale – theater of absurd The day after a storm betrays the Southern sun, the sad bruises hidden in amorphous phases peeking through, unbidden. The day after a storm, smectic layers emerge iridescent yet clear, suffusing the soulful, coaxing Sol to appear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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January 12, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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January 12, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Many thanks for your kind congratulations. :)
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January 10, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations Linda! Your descriptive poem "After a Storm", has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned you a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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January 10, 2024 at 11:39 AM
Many thanks for this placement and for your supportive comments Emile. I'm honored. :)
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December 31, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Lovely, descriptive piece, Linda! Janice
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January 2, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Many thanks dear Janice. Have a lovely new year! :)
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December 30, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Awesome write enjoyed reading your poem have a blessed new year
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December 31, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Thank you for the warm wishes for the new year Yolanda. I appreciate your visit and comments so much! hugs and blessings for your new year and may joy and love flourish in your life. :)
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December 28, 2023 at 4:14 PM
I think you should write this poems Pre-quil and call it "Before The Storm". You did a great job with this though.
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December 29, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Hmmmm. An interesting concept Miranda. I'll give that some thought. Thanks for the idea, and for your nice comment. :)
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December 28, 2023 at 11:42 AM
I love the aftermath of a storm, everything is still and the air feels fresher, sadly though it can leave destruction in its wake.. Tom
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December 29, 2023 at 7:34 AM
The air smells so fresh and refreshing afterward. I love a storm, not the destructive kind. Good to see you Tom. Thank you! :)
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December 28, 2023 at 10:47 AM
I enjoyed reading your "After a Storm." write. I have been in many bad storms. They sure are chaotic. "Happy New Year 2024" .................
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December 28, 2023 at 11:39 AM
Thank you dear Paula and a very happy New Year to you! :)
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