After a Rain

rain hits my tongue after a drop heeded eyelashes weep - John Beam

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John Beam

Date: 3/7/2012 10:01:00 PM

after a rain (re-do)

John Beam

Date: 3/7/2012 10:48:00 AM

thanks , I am glad you liked it. I would have liked to got more detail in

David Williams

Date: 3/7/2012 1:20:00 AM

John really like this..David

John Beam
Date: 3/7/2012 10:58:00 AM

thanks , I am glad you liked it. I would have liked to got more detail in

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2012 10:51:00 PM

I enjoyed the images here, getting in scent and sound as well!

John Beam
Date: 3/7/2012 10:58:00 AM

thanks, I enjoyed reading some yours also.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/6/2012 8:22:00 PM

I love the smell after a rain on a hot day....I love the colors and shapes that clouds can form.

John Beam
Date: 3/6/2012 8:33:00 PM

yes, I enjoy those too.

John Beam
Date: 3/6/2012 8:31:00 PM

thank you , but it is only because I have truly amazing teacher Jesus. Let us listen to the heart beat of God love shall never die

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/6/2012 8:21:00 PM

that is amazing!!