Af-Rui-Ka

The African countries lived well by themselves
Until the white man crossed, continental shelves

I can understand adventurers who decided to roam
But not the conglomerates who raped as they combed

The British in Sudan and the French colonies
Never helped Africa being brought to it's knees

This beautiful continent enjoying political appease
But it has a powder-keg fuse that can light with such ease

Angola, Uganda, and Rwanda hit the news
Civil Wars and Genocide once again man's abuse

The biggest sore it carries in this quite wonderful place
One word, slavery, white man's ultimate disgrace

It's not for me to say about a place I don't belong
It's just such a tragedy that it's seen so many wrongs

This continent called Africa, African through and through
Adeleke Adeite, be proud to be you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Conway Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Fantastic write James, a wonderful tribute to such an amazing continent!~Tirzah~
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Adeleke Adeite's contest "Africans Attutude" Love, Carol
Cole Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 3:45 AM
really loved this poem, good exploration of history, loved your use of language in verse 5, great flow, well done, yemanya xx
Haick Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 9:22 PM
My congratulations on your awesome win, James! A fine tribute to Mother Africa! Peace, love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem in the Afrian attitude contest by Adeleke .. enjoy your wonderful win for another wonderful write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..
Adeite Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 12:27 PM
thanks for the encouragement, This piece is just incredible! I love each lines and the passion with which you write Accept my warm congrats. Thanks for supporting my contest. I wish you all the best with your writings. You are going places! Love, ~Adeleke~.
Hales Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Thank you James x for passing fate comment ,i did nt realise that was on there till carol told me ha ha ha what am i like x i just missed you on fb :-)
La France Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 2:53 PM
I think this is a wonderful entry for the contest, and I wish you the best of luck, and you have soup mail.. love constance
Guzzi Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 1:21 PM
http://www.npr.org/programs/re/archivesdate/2004/feb/voodoo/ try this site Jamie..scan to the bottom and it has articles on LOTS of different places & topics in Africa! I bet you could do us a good verse on the Druids or the celtic belief system? For Broad Horizons...get poem!
Bateman Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Good job James I really liked this one ! keep on writing ") ~!~Heather~!~
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Wonderful poem which carries so much truth James!Great indeed!C
Spence Sr Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 10:04 AM
This is excellent. The words flow very well and the piece is quite moving and historical. Best wishes in the contest. Great job! Joseph
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June 23, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Great historical write that reflects not only your writing talent but your research skills as well, James. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Hales Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 10:55 PM
you have soup mail .... sarah
Fone Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Nice one my friend!, once again a fine piece of writing that was apleasure to read! best wishes, June xx
Brown Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 5:36 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning James. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
Hales Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 11:31 PM
This is truely wonderful James x sarah x
Mehta Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:46 PM
A wonderful thoughts and expressions on Adeleke's Africa
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:43 PM
Great write about Africa...Much unrest and problems have plagued it for sure..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Neels Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:30 PM
James absolutely love your take on the African continent... All the best if this is for the contest - rgds Wilma
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