Africa - Tanka Contest

Sweet Home Eden.
Amidst widening desert.
Faint lions whisper:
"globes warming, rains rare."
Sweet Home Eden, for how long?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Lovely written, Yvette Lisa. - well done!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sanderson Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 6:55 PM
I love this great write Yvette best wishes for contest<3 Carma
Sanderson Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 6:56 PM
Sorry thought it was entered in a contest but still great write...
Palli Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Hopefully soon! Nice write
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