Africa

Dust devils try to suckle on your breast
Illusions of water shimmer on the horizon
Stirring up the dust bowls on your barren chest
Your body adorned with skeletons of your children.

As evening nears the sun cries tears of blood
For the thirsty children of the dry scorched earth
Scrambling for life giving succor in holes of mud
That once was lakes, filled by songbird's mirth.

And your children cry out in deep despair
As even the mud holes turn to arid dust.
Thirst and hunger are rampant everywhere
As they search for nourishment in your crust.

Flimsy smudges in the dusty sky
Streaking as on high winds they ride,
Slowly forming cotton balls way up high
Abstract shapes that drift and glide.

A silly little wind comes out to play
Frolicking through the red brown sand,
Swirling and twirling every which way
Touching and tickling the dusty land.

Majestic the clouds now swell and grow
Towering monoliths touched with blue.
Shards of lightning flickers back and fro
Distant rumblings, as if right on cue.

Powder puffs of single raindrops fall
Rolling drumbeat in crescendo grow.
Veils of rain a steel gray wall
Thunderstorm a majestic show.

Your children frolic in bubbling streams
Your body transformed into God's garden.
Continent of nightmares and golden dreams,
A rainbow vision of God's merciful pardon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:46 AM
Brilliant and vividly presented poem! Your pen flows with the natural ease of a true poet, Heidie! A great write! Regards, Robert.
Jordan Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Heidie this is fantastic in every sense of the word - wonderfully written tale of life and how strong Gods role is in it all - Thank you for comment - YF4L, God Bless, mj
Neels Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Wow, what an awesome vision you create with your words to capture reality in its most true form ~ rgds Wilma
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May 24, 2010 at 4:34 PM
Powerful poem. The vivid imagery brings this stark reality to life. Gripping! The rhyme works well. You are such a talented writer as well this piece proves. Keep on sharing your creativity. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
Mason Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 4:26 PM
Powerful, powerful writing here, Heidie. Was wonderful to see your comment as its been way tooooo long since you've posted here at PoetrySoup!! Are you back now? Hope you are having a wonderful spring and return soon with more great writing!!
Johnson Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 6:31 PM
Well written piece. I was glad for the rainfall. Thank you for your comments on my poetry. I had not seen your poems before. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 4:33 PM
truely breathtaking! lovely, sad, hopefull. Light & Love
Knop Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 6:19 AM
One of the best poems I read recently, Heidie! Africa is blessed and condemned at the same time. We all should care! Thanks for your comments...Love, Gert
Mason Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 9:23 PM
Beautiful writing here Heidie!! Great imagery and I would guess you have been there ... or not ... !?! I imagine parts of the continent must be gloriously beautiful and others would be except for the outrageous poverty!
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August 8, 2009 at 2:31 PM
Your metaphors are simply amazing, and even though this is about Africa's children, do I sense some introspection here in yourself? Heidie, you're a brilliant genius, and one of the most beautiful souls I have encountered on the site. I can picture them now, gathering and running around in circles in the rain. Love always, Sara:)
Foster Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Heidi, your imagery really takes the reader on an awesome journey through the torment and ends with a lovely reprieve. Excellent tone, cadence, and figurative language throughout it is indeed a pleasure to have read for you. Thank you, for your welcome comments, on my poetry, God’s Love, Always, Adell
Anish Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Evocative poem! Have you ever been there? The last stanza brings in a ray of hope. Yours Matthew Anish
Richards Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Wow Heidie....the stuggle endured, and a ray of mercy at the end. Wonderful writing, with a sympathic heart and soul. Great job! ~ Carrie
Fraser Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 8:38 AM
Excellent piece of work Heidie, a delight to read poetry as good as this is>>James
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