Africa

Africa, beautiful continent Dreamy echoes fascinate Giraffes heighten inclines Jurassic known linger Madagascar nestles offshore Primates quest reform Savannah tribes umbilical Visioned waves x-ray Young zebra

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2009 2:13:00 PM

WOW! James ... great visual ABC .. this type of poetry really picks one's brain, yes? I luv a good challenge so I tried to utilize this form of poetry for myself... I am impressed with all your wonderful postings .. and I intend to read them all... eventually.. thankxxx for your wonderful and encouraging comments on my poetry.. have u checked out Daffy Definitions by HGarvey Daniel yet? its fun. .. hope u participate.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2009 3:57:00 AM

Good use of ABC form. Africa has such diversity of weather, land forms, and animals. Keep writing. Sara

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 6/22/2009 5:39:00 AM

Great description of Africa, very well put together. The tribute to your father and this one is one of my favorites.

Stefania Carmen Misaila

Date: 6/10/2009 10:53:00 AM

wow! this abc really caught the essance of the african savannah! you're good! you're too good! stop! :))

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/9/2009 10:58:00 AM

i am proud to be an african. thanks for sharing this

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/9/2009 9:08:00 AM

What a beautiful picture you paint James, this is excellent from A to z.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/8/2009 4:26:00 PM

Awesome images of a beautiful continent, James! You allow us to see it se clearly through your words. Colorful, exciting write, James! Love, Carolyn

Heidie Buys

Date: 6/8/2009 3:37:00 PM

Very clever and well thought out. Enjoyed reading this one. Regards Heidie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/8/2009 12:59:00 PM

This is gorgeous my friend...savannah tribes umbilical....very effective piece of writing.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/8/2009 12:44:00 PM

wild tropical Africa,my dream place to visit--beautiful description--very nicely penned James--charma