Afi Tag Art

hands ground
while walls rise
board ceilings
my knuckles whiten
the crowd looks away

arttanka

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Thomas Martin

July 31, 2015 at 1:21 PM

Interesting and memorable, Debbie! Like nontraditional tanka!

Andrea Dietrich

May 17, 2015 at 11:18 PM

It reads just like graffiti art, Debs!! Hey, I saw you tried to do a contest? When I tried mine last week, it also looked like yours and then I went back and did it again and it went through. I think if you try again, it works! Did i presume right that you were not able to post it? Try it one more time and see if it works!