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Art by AFI

hands ground while walls rise board ceilings my knuckles whiten the crowd looks away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Thomas Martin
Date: 7/31/2015 1:21:00 PM
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Interesting and memorable, Debbie! Like nontraditional tanka!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/17/2015 11:18:00 PM
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It reads just like graffiti art, Debs!! Hey, I saw you tried to do a contest? When I tried mine last week, it also looked like yours and then I went back and did it again and it went through. I think if you try again, it works! Did i presume right that you were not able to post it? Try it one more time and see if it works!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/3/2015 10:49:00 AM
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Another 7, Mom's endurance.
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Kp Nunez
Date: 4/3/2015 11:24:00 AM
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Why, Debbie, I can imagine you were smiling as you wrote this...the sheer dare-deviltry of the youth! You have style, like the art. Kim :)
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Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/3/2015 10:49:00 AM
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Debbie,I love graffiti art and anytime we could connect art with words ..slam dunk Thank you tonytocaa
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/2/2015 9:37:00 AM
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Your tanka here elevates the work of the painter. A Fav!
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