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Afghanistan

I feel like Afghanistan All the friends who helped me through my depression Have left I want to leave this body I call home Rather than wage war with my demons Strong and mighty Smiling is equivalent to holding a plane at Kabul. I fly for a minute And drop back down into the abyss Depression you restrict me like the Afghan woman now. But I will learn to love my body And I will find my home some day

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/21/2024 9:56:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Julie Little

Date: 10/28/2021 6:02:00 AM

Hello tesem! Great way to describe! Unfortunately, too many of us can relate. You are definitely not alone. I am glad to see someone young on here. Not enough poetry enthusiasm in todays generation. I am fairly new myself. If you ever have questions, need an opinion on a poem/story, need a proofreader or just need to talk to someone, feel free to soupmail me. Keep your chin up, and keep writing! Sincerely, Julie Little