Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Affirmation of Hope

Through pungent fog , ashen white
notions about hope grow contrite-
amidst gust,  tears rake anew
where solace begs its due.
Hours taunt of curtain call
inflicting doubt on nightscape's pall--

Tables empty    his footprints leave
while seasons pray for reprieve...
until  he knocks    enshrining eve
my  patience affirmed ,  ‘ just believe.'



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4/06/2019
Lu Loo’s Contest :
10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme III

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Beautiful Scars April 10, 2019 at 5:27 AM lovely poem all around dear Nette, thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2019 at 11:46 AM congrats on a well deserved win. Hugs Rick.

Caren Krutsinger April 8, 2019 at 12:41 AM You have surpassed this challenge, my friend. Bravo!

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2019 at 1:56 PM WEll done, Nette. i love the message of hope in this. Congrats for your win.

Gershon Wolf April 7, 2019 at 1:12 PM What haunting imagery you've transformed into such inspirational affirmation. Bravo, nette. A FAVE! ~ gw

Swetha Vangaveti April 7, 2019 at 12:36 AM Profound and splendid. :)

Laura Leiser April 6, 2019 at 4:38 PM Marvelous words, Nette! Your literary vocabulary stuns and amazes me! Good luck in the contest! :)

Jennifer Proxenos April 6, 2019 at 3:42 PM Believing is achieving - so well penned Nette. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham April 6, 2019 at 2:40 PM Just believing is the first step to achieving your goals and making your hopes a reality. So well written Nette, enjoy the weekend. Tom.

Heidi Sands April 6, 2019 at 2:21 PM Well written Nette :) Great ending too .

Vijay Pandit April 6, 2019 at 12:39 PM Happy ending..the power of believing..well written, Nette! FYI: I will be away next week starting 4/7.

David Mchattie April 6, 2019 at 12:37 PM Nicely done. You certainly have a way with words. Such imagery.