Affection In Motion

Its universe drapes time in buoyancy Where endless space binds law of attraction Atoms merging, clasped by human light An energy wheeling freely, unseen; ‘Til moonlight climbs inside lovers’ halo. Exploring their path, frenzy unlike space Through quantum leaps weightless among new stars Ascending on scales of breaths without measure, Like passion heating a current; two mouths press. Dazed by such fusion, wheel of Physics nods To bring glow, showing what it's always known Soul's beauty, radiating love unbound; As dusk explodes to bless fluid motion. With gentle fire, night sky dare not question A universe lost in a trance of love’s spark; There is no logic to explain,when Affection blends cosmos of a kiss. ------------------- "Gravitation cannot be held responsible for people falling in love. How on earth can you explain in terms of chemistry and physics so important a biological phenomenon as first love? Put your hand on a stove for a minute and it seems like an hour. Sit with that special girl for an hour and it seems like a minute. That's relativity.” ---Albert Einstein Personifying Science Contest, Sheri Fresonke Harper by nette onclaud

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Date: 10/23/2013 8:53:00 PM
Nette, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:44:00 PM
Nette, nice nice... congrats...Linda
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:17:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, nette
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:54:00 PM
Thanks much for your wonderful quote and poem to do it justice. Unfortunately, the contest requirements called for a personification form. You did justice to the contest and I enjoyed reading your writing. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:44:00 AM
A dazzling beauty in another masterpiece of yours my dear friend Nette. Superb write as always. So so happy to read it this evening. So love it and enjoyed. By the way, I hope you're always @ the best of everything especially today. Again, thank you so much for your poetry & your visit. take care always. Regards to the kababayans. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/29/2013 6:30:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. and deeply expressed. Tfs
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:18:00 PM
Amazing beauty in this poem loved and enjoyed. A very high thought of depth. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/28/2013 8:12:00 PM
The last line in each stanza links amazingly! Cool write! my friend! jimbo
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:40:00 PM
Whatever you are drinking in your water I want some. This is amazing Nette!
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:29:00 PM
What a title we have here Nette!Amazing poetry!
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Date: 9/28/2013 12:32:00 PM
The chemistry of love/ passion knows no equation, agree... Infinite flow can never be bound even by an iota of mathematical fractions, it's just it. Did I say this was a brilliant force?
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Date: 9/28/2013 10:31:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful poem my friend Nette. - Hope your weekend will be enjoyable! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:42:00 AM
The aura of a kiss is expressed deep within your tender write my friend! I love how you used infinity within your awesome poem here Nette! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful piece this morning! What a truly glorious kiss enhanced poem this surely is, quite the special verse, Great Work!!
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