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Affairs of the Heart

We stood apart waiting for dusk to fall pale the light that may not bring us to next week: Both of us wanted ties of chains relieved you from angst, and I from not loving enough. Then you entered into a gentle maze of just how time drained pool of years I barely recalled, our moments chilled by desperate silence while late-night marked your face, ashen. And there you were, beautiful in dew’s reflection sharing the glee from our early anniversaries when days held our pledge, ' for better or worse, ' as I unveiled this mask I dared not shed. Back and forth you whispered like fragrant mist tracing our breakthroughs when stars grew narrow; until we slowly choked on milestones of owned joys and trials …I listened, listened. A fool, I cannot ride the last sunset without her, then she asked," is there anything you need to say?" “My love, I promise to fill my heart's absence oh we must go on; charmed life is ours, evermore." ------------------- Contest of Silent One: Love Story ~ from a man's point of view~ Re-post 11/3/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/6/2015 8:34:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win, SKAT love
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Date: 7/6/2015 11:48:00 AM
Simply beautiful Nette. This is a very perceptive write coming from a man's perspective. Loved it! hugs
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:57:00 AM
Great work,congrats nette...huggs
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Enjoyed your write!
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Date: 7/5/2015 10:39:00 PM
Congrats on awesome winning write nette!
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:16:00 PM
Nette Congrats on your win. LINDA
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thank You for entering my contest.
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Date: 7/4/2015 11:40:00 AM
Nette, such a beautiful poem with a twist, very moving 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13
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Date: 7/4/2015 6:22:00 AM
Any man would somehow be moved by this emotive, heartfelt poem. A fine way to keep us in touch with real feelings!
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Date: 7/4/2015 5:38:00 AM
Absolutely heartwarming! This excellent poem touches the soul deeply. I can sense the feelings of lovers torn apart by circumstances yet ending happily.
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