Affairs of the Heart

We stood apart waiting for dusk to fall
pale the light that may not bring us to next week:
Both of us wanted ties of chains relieved
you from angst, and I from not loving enough.

Then you entered into a gentle maze of just how
time drained pool of years I barely recalled,
our moments chilled by desperate silence
while late-night marked your face, ashen.

And there you were, beautiful in dew’s reflection
sharing the glee from our early anniversaries
when days held our pledge, ' for better or worse, '
as I unveiled this mask I dared not shed. 

Back and forth you whispered like fragrant mist
tracing our  breakthroughs when stars grew narrow;
until we slowly choked on milestones
of owned joys and trials …I listened, listened.

A fool, I cannot ride the last sunset without her,
then she asked," is there anything you need to say?"

“My love, I promise to  fill my heart's absence
oh we must go on; charmed life is ours, evermore."


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Contest of Silent One: Love Story 
~ from a man's point of view~
Re-post   11/3/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win, SKAT love
Nunez Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Simply beautiful Nette. This is a very perceptive write coming from a man's perspective. Loved it! hugs
Kayode Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 1:57 AM
Great work,congrats nette...huggs
Carter Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 12:05 AM
Congrats on your win! Enjoyed your write!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Congrats on awesome winning write nette!
A   Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 9:16 PM
Nette Congrats on your win. LINDA
Konos Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Thank You for entering my contest.
La France Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Nette, such a beautiful poem with a twist, very moving 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13
Gonza Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 6:22 AM
Any man would somehow be moved by this emotive, heartfelt poem. A fine way to keep us in touch with real feelings!
Em Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 5:38 AM
Absolutely heartwarming! This excellent poem touches the soul deeply. I can sense the feelings of lovers torn apart by circumstances yet ending happily.
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