Affairs of the Heart

When the music doesn't sing When whispered words want wings Then affairs of the heart are just flings

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/18/2019 1:49:00 PM

'when whispered words/want wings' - beautiful line, great alliteration, gw!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/18/2019 5:05:00 PM

Holy Guacamole, Michelle! You noticed the alliteration; I sure didn't! Some 'poet' I am, eh?! Talk about a bit of luck there... Thanks for pointing it out to me. ~ Very nearsighted in Chicago

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/17/2019 8:40:00 PM

so very true my friend :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/17/2019 9:22:00 PM

Yup. Sad, but true. Grim, even. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/17/2019 8:38:00 PM

For sure...no magic

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/17/2019 9:22:00 PM

Right. No magic. Perfect comment. Thanks, Kim. Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/17/2019 6:12:00 PM

So very true! Some things are not meant to be! Just flings in the night!;) lovely my friend I love this!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/17/2019 11:45:00 PM

Will call you whatever you wish! Hahaha!;) seriously though it was a great write!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/17/2019 7:53:00 PM

So interesting how you view this one!! I'm so darn straight and old-fashioned that I think of 'flings' negatively... Oh, well. ~ Call me Curmudgeon, I guess