Aerial Patrol

Soaring with stingers,
Unsuspecting tiny strikes,
Bee’s protect their hives.

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 05/19/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 8:44 AM
Not my favorite creatures these black and gold blighters, lovely way to tell them tho, James
Hudson Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Ouch, my husband slapped a bee once that landed on his pajama fly, you can guess the rest. LOL:)-AA Cute Haiku (nevermind)
Neal Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Beautiful work Nathan, I left you some soup mail.
Leccese Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:21 PM
Yeah that's a type-o Let me fix that. Thanks for pointing that out. lol
Gorelick Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:19 PM
wonderful little haiku..good job. (tiny?)
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