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Aerial Painting

Aerial Painting The painting in the hall of an old bi-plane flying a across a blue sky, was different this morning, it had landed by a waterfall and the pilots stood leaning against the plane’s fuselage slowly smoking a cigarette, eyes closed enjoying every moment, every inhale of scented tobacco. I looked at the painting again the sky was dark, there was lightning in the air the pilot had flown to the front and collided with a barrage balloon, the plane was a broken as thrown to the ground by a spoilt boy who had wanted a fire-engine for his birthday, and know only the blue sky prevails.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 5:24:00 AM
A beautiful oil painting.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/4/2012 5:51:00 AM
thank you Kathy
Date: 5/3/2012 9:04:00 AM
An interesting concept and a valiant attempt to convey how each viewing of the painting yielded a different result...I appreciate your idea and your development, but would suggest that this piece could use a little editorial "cleaning up"....otherwise, good work!
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/3/2012 9:26:00 AM
thank you leo

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