Advice From a Zooplankton

Like a shy zooplankton, I float along
          Carried by fierce currents.
      I struggle but fear makes for strong,
                    harsh deterrents

This life feels microscopic, the drifting
          in every direction
      I can feel the current shifting;
                    no protection

So I yield myself to the water’s will
          As true zooplankton do.
      It washes over me, until
                    I’m born anew

For the Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France 
1/12/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Cory, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, nice poem, well done, Constance
Bryan Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much for reading and sponsoring!
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Creative way to go with this challenge. Congratulations on your winner. Sara.
Bryan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 1:26 PM
Thanks so much Sara! I really appreciate the comment. Was trying to push the Z word envelope : )
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