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Youth

Advice for Beginners

a note to my younger self 

Never trust a love that rushes into
moments unaware of sacred things like  
dappled sun and birds at rest in high tree
tops orchestrating springtime’s soon debut~
never trust a love that thrusts its sharp spike
into softened flesh to possess the key 

that opens innocence to roguish rot,
that seeks to lock you in a cage of psych-
opathic greed and maniac decree
of monolithic sacrifice, give thought;
know yourself ~ stay free!
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:12 PM
wow, this poem is magnificent filled with reflective wisdom for your 'younger self.' I found this poem touching and captivating.
Achara Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:40 AM
Thank you
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