Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Pleiades

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- Adventure - Pleiades a -

Automobile vintage
   Armed with few horsepowers
   American girls dreams  
   Amazing and stylish  
   Agile it still rolling
   Away with big wheel bike 
   Admit, prime example 







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Each line has only 6 syllables
(poem in the Pleiades form)
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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Bl Devnath August 24, 2016 at 12:09 PM Beautiful adventure of wheeler's development and it's importance to American girls. A seven. Beautifully written. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2016 at 2:00 PM - Thanks my friend Bl, for friendly visits a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Ainsley August 18, 2016 at 9:41 PM It made me think of an Mg the cook drove at a county club kitchen I worked at when I was young and ripe with dreams.Now l am so much older and my dreams have turned to .wine Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2016 at 6:29 AM - It's true, our dreams changed over the years - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi August 16, 2016 at 4:24 AM Hahaha. Bikes have come a long way... Congrats Anne Lise, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-) Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2016 at 7:18 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Teddy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus August 15, 2016 at 6:29 AM Dreams and adventure go hand in hand, Anne Lise:) I owned a bike, but my dream car never materialized:) ~ Congrats on your fine win! Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2016 at 7:18 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman August 14, 2016 at 9:13 AM Anne-Lise, your poem made me smile. Congrats on your well written Pleaides! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings! Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2016 at 9:20 AM - Nice to participate, Kim :) - thanks for my win, glad you liked this one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 13, 2016 at 6:04 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest Anne-Lise. I enjoyed your entry! ; ) Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2016 at 7:12 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 1:26 PM I'm back to say CONGRATS!!!...beautifully done Anne-Lise...god bless...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 2:14 PM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison August 13, 2016 at 9:58 AM Dropping back with my congrats Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 11:04 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian August 13, 2016 at 7:14 AM Fascinating....Loved the pic that goes with the poem. American girls chasing their dreams. :) Love from Cyprus. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 7:23 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Eileen :) - Love from Norway // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May August 13, 2016 at 7:04 AM Congrats on your win Sunshine Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 7:08 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 13, 2016 at 4:18 AM yo, this deserves a win, anne.. sweet congrats!..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 7:08 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beautiful Scars August 13, 2016 at 3:50 AM Anne-Lise, congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 7:07 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2016 at 1:13 AM Nice one. Unique topic!! Congrats on the win. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 7:07 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. August 13, 2016 at 12:35 AM Hi Ann-Lise, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 7:07 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith August 12, 2016 at 9:58 PM Such an interesting take on an adveventure theme, congratulations Anne-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2016 at 7:06 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 8:49 AM A beautiful Pleiades Anne-Lise...god bless and good luck...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2016 at 10:51 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel August 12, 2016 at 1:37 AM Lovely Anne-lise:)All the best:) Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2016 at 7:12 AM - Jo, thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 11, 2016 at 5:30 AM Amazing! A seven dear Anne-Lise, hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2016 at 7:48 AM - Thanks my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2016 at 4:47 AM greeat theme on a ride and so well composed, anne... a winner for me..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2016 at 7:47 AM - Nette, thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison August 10, 2016 at 5:19 PM Never been my dream but then I'm not American lol:-) great take on the contest its quite a challenging form:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2016 at 7:48 AM - Jan, thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner August 10, 2016 at 4:34 PM I always pictured you as a motorcycle girl. That long blond hair blowing in the wind. Fun read AL. A very tough and unique form. Good luck! Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2016 at 4:56 PM - I have long blond hair ..... but no motorcycle .... :)))) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. August 10, 2016 at 3:26 PM Hi Anne-Lise, You penned a good piece in this difficul form. I agree "we" do dream, girls world wide. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2016 at 4:58 PM - Yes, it was a bit difficult ... I admit, Alexis :) - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith August 10, 2016 at 2:35 PM An American boys dream as well A-L. Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2016 at 2:53 PM - Of course, Tim - Thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)