Advantage Over

in a game where love means nothing ~ new set of balls may just help you score

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/29/2022 2:10:00 PM

I felt a tennis presence in this poem but taking a short break I also understand is necessary. Hugs and blessings my friend Jennifer

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/29/2022 2:39:00 PM

Heya Jennifer, yeah I’m just messing about with tennis metaphors, at least I hope so, lol, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/26/2022 10:23:00 AM

Might just give you the edge. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/26/2022 10:32:00 AM

I remember watching Wimbledon as a kid Tom, and being perplexed by the umpire calling for new balls after every few sets, I used to be thinking I’d get weeks out of them lol, cheers David

Deb M

Date: 1/26/2022 7:37:00 AM

David that is very witty and extremely clever and well written! Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/26/2022 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Deb a little time out from the tennis madness of the last few weeks, cheers David