Adulterous Tryst Haiku

ADULTEROUS TRYST

                                                   Mountain fog
                                                Descends on betrayal
                                                    Steals the kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 5:58 AM
Ahhh!!! Enjoyed this one today..Sara
Anderson-Throop Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 1:57 PM
glad you like it....always a pleasure to have astute readers...
Williams Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 2:38 PM
Vic, this is a great image...David
Anderson-Throop Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 1:57 PM
thanks, David...it is one of MY favorites, too...
Manassian Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 9:00 AM
LOVED THIS! It brought the scene sharply to my mind! Great write!
Anderson-Throop Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 1:59 PM
always wonderful to receive feedback! and, especially, that the scene in my mind got onto the paper!
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