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once soothing to two wherever time was (throughout our relationship at times there was harmony) lovers in the moment (that moment in time when we engaged in sex) in music of the man who nature dances to (god was with us) wrestle in the wind feel their existence (and in our love of nature we felt our existence and we were with god) on nothing they roll (our love levitated us) unaware of cold (we felt nothing but one another) swim the desert sand (lost in our unconscious) and she wearing his smoking jacket (and when it was done we were still one) then it starts again (our sexual experience continues) the touch of chains as they mesh explosive on the edge of a steel rip (bondage and trust on the cutting edge of our experimentation) an hour of talking (we talk) then their bare flesh together in their source timed (once again we bond in the making of love) the crackling sound of their intercourse (our sounds like fireworks) as in a filmstrip (and we go beyond reality) and once again a thousand explosions (as our orgasms are multiple and explosive) 22~12~2014 With Love Maurice Yvonne
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Fleming Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 10:54 AM
An excellent read, Maurice. Yours is the second poem today that i have read concerning the "taboo" subject of BDSM. A while ago i wrote a long, explicit poem about the subject. One day, when i work up the courage, i may well present it. Nice work, Maurice! :) john.
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December 24, 2014 at 5:01 AM
When sex is the fruit of love it can reach the highest dimension, going beyond reality. Your third line makes an emphasize on harmony...a very good point that contributes much to this attainment. Excellent poem, my friend. I think I'll get me one of those art works! // paul
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December 22, 2014 at 11:24 PM
I don't know how you got all that from that sculputure, but you ARE prolific!!! It was fun seeing all your new posts. I hope others will see them too and leave comments. Hope you get better soon!!
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December 22, 2014 at 3:01 PM
- A great poem, Maurice !!! - I wish you and your family a beautiful and peaceful Christmas - Enjoy and relax with all you love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 22, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Boom! I hear music and see glistening stars...you never cease to amaze me.
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 11:52 AM
What an explosive erotic write my friend - incredible imagery - shame the lady in the pic is legless lol :-( hugs jan xxx
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