Adult Children: a New Species

They look like us, 
On the outside,
Only just younger.

They walk upright,
Can speak English;
No, not foreigners.

We nourish them,
Provide for them;
Help Them grow stronger.

They sprout gadgets,
To interface
One with another.

Prefer online
To face to face.
Virtual lover?

Will they survive,
Even evolve,
To become human

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 31, 2016 at 7:41 PM
wow, that was interesting. LINDA
Halliday Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Inspired by kids that won't move out but bring in others to live with them. Thanks for commenting Linda
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Oh this made me smile on one hand but sad on the other - I do worry for the younger generation they are losing the art of real face to face communication - it is all 'mobiles and tablets' these days:-( hugs jan xx
Halliday Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:32 AM
Inspired by kids that won't move out but bring in others to live with them. Thanks for commenting Jan
Gupta Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading...
Halliday Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Glad you liked it. It was inspired by kids that won't move out but bring in others to live with them. Thanks for commenting.
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