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Adult Behavior

I learned to spy on adult behavior as a child, totally out of control. For when sent to bed for misbehavior I would secretly peek through the keyhole. My parent's world included make-believe pretending telling white lies didn’t count. And I would watch them socially deceive knowing they wouldn’t be called to account. I'd hear them laugh at their friend’s naughty jokes that would have earned me a spanking for sure. And though at times they seemed someone else's folks, their hypocrisy was mine to endure. The invaluable lesson for me, was, always block the keyhole with a key. (Sonnet) Jan. 24, 2019 SLAP THE MUSE AND TURN IT LOOSE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless
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Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 9:12 PM
Double standards. So difficult for kids to make sense of it all. Well penned, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Kiser Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Ba-ha-ha-ha-ha... Love the ending here; we've all learned something from adults when we were kids. Still, I love that you learned to block that keyhole. Good one.
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Thanks M. L., one learns to close the loop holes they once employed and enjoyed my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 4:16 PM
This part is so absolutely one hundred percent true: "My parent's world was based on make-believe pretending that telling white lies don't count. And I would watch them socially deceive knowing they wouldn’t be called to account." Great job, my friend.
Pinet Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Thanks Caren, you always make my day my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 3:59 PM
Emile, great write, interesting take on the contest, and best of luck ~
Pinet Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate it, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Rather a child, spy a parent in prayer, in soft candlelight not in the flicker of shadows and letdowns and lies.
Pinet Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Thanks Kim, if only life were like that my friend, Emile.
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