Adrift

in life's labyrinths we get adrift easily yet we move forward perching hope on a belief of following the right path. 25.03.2015

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Date: 4/2/2015 3:12:00 PM

Great faith based winner!! Congrats..Sara

Date: 3/29/2015 12:16:00 PM

Mohan, inspiration in a few words, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, flowers fill . . .

Date: 3/29/2015 10:55:00 AM

Interesting flow of words but a lot of truth a 7 and Congratulations on your win. Blessings eve

Date: 3/29/2015 10:01:00 AM

I just read your Tanka, Mohan, and find your words create such a powerful image of our journey through life. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Date: 3/28/2015 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations Mohan! Kim:)

Date: 3/28/2015 5:53:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 3/28/2015 12:48:00 AM

this one is very thoughtful and a nice symbolic tanka that I thought deserved to be seen. congrats in my contest.

Date: 3/25/2015 5:45:00 PM

oh so true Mohan:-) Hugs jan xx