Adrift

in life's labyrinths 
we get adrift easily 
yet we move forward 
perching hope on a belief 
of following the right path.

25.03.2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Great faith based winner!! Congrats..Sara
La France Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 12:16 PM
Mohan, inspiration in a few words, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, flowers fill . . .
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:55 AM
Interesting flow of words but a lot of truth a 7 and Congratulations on your win. Blessings eve
Haight Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:01 AM
I just read your Tanka, Mohan, and find your words create such a powerful image of our journey through life. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Nunez Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations Mohan! Kim:)
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 5:53 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 12:48 AM
this one is very thoughtful and a nice symbolic tanka that I thought deserved to be seen. congrats in my contest.
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 5:45 PM
oh so true Mohan:-) Hugs jan xx
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