Adrift

There was a CEO with but one failing He drank himself sloppy when sailing. He had three shots at dawn And drank the whole day long. Cleaning his yacht took hours of bailing.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2015 1:53:00 PM

- I really like this :) - well done, Paul ! - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/12/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thank you, Anne. It's thoughtful and kind of you to comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2015 11:54:00 AM

Eww I hope the sea was really rough for him and he was green lol:-) Sadly in reality if he was rich one of his minions would clean up the mess! Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/12/2015 3:20:00 PM

Thanks for commenting, Jan. Yes, as a CEO w/ a yacht, he did the work himself—not (I forgot).