Adrift

You are adrift
In my ocean thoughts
Your mouth is a current
I am swept under
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ober Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 12:38 PM
This one is stunning! "In my ocean thoughts" - I love that. I'm adding this little beauty to my faves.
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 2:29 PM
this is good sensuality. I love a short poem like this one. Great to see your very first post here.
Hunter Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 1:46 PM
This is cool...
Goodson Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Jeremy, I Loved this poem. Keep up the good work.
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 6:31 AM
lovely done......nice write...........
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June 4, 2012 at 9:48 PM
JEARMY ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great night ;-) always ~PD ***
May Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:55 PM
nicely done
Lu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 10:00 AM
you know, I can tell you are a great thinker by the depth of your very profoundness in such short and simple word usage. Very exceelnt poetry here! Cindy Lu
Lu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:59 AM
you know, I can tell you are a great thinker by the depth of your very profoundness in such short and simple word usage. Very exceelnt poetry here! Cindy Lu
O'Leary Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 2:44 AM
Very nice... Terry
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