Adoration of Nature

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An ABC poem is a poem where each line of the poem begins with a letter in the alphabet, starting with A and moving in order through Z

Adrift in silent tranquillity, admiring a Backdrop of nature's charm and grace. Clarion cloudless sapphire skies above Depict the state of calmness in my mind. Eyes admire an abundance of blossoming Flowers, red tulips, lilac lilies and bluebells. Growing around lush emerald meadows. Heart is at ease watching robins in trees. Instrumental echoes of their chirps among Japanese cherry blossom buds are so fragile. Kindred spirits of nature entwine with my soul, Lingering in the harmony of serenity and purity. Mind is overcome with a sense of sadness. Numb to the atrocities causing Earth's demise. Overdose of pollution conflicts our existence Painful reminders are shown through disasters Questioning the actions of global leaders Reluctant to change their imperialistic needs. Secretly increasing their imperialistic desires. Trying to fool us, whilst abusing our habitat with Unjust behaviours destroying the ecological system. Vegetation covered in pesticides genetically modified, yet World is still full of poverty, hunger and drought with Xenophobes increasing injustices for minorities. You can only strive for global betterment, by Zealously fighting the mental process of humanity.

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/12/2024 7:08:00 AM

Good Morning Silent. Hi. You once again share your skilled poetic talent. The Abecedarian format in its entirety is not an easy format to complete especially with the ending letters xyz and also to have the entry flow with ease without it being choppy. However you mastered both. Your theme without saying is lovely with imagery. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. May the pen be with you always. Peace and Blessings (smile)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/8/2023 4:09:00 AM

Great example for your contest, SO.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/6/2023 5:45:00 PM

Your words bring both joy and sadness. The beauty of nature, being destroyed by the reckless regard of her worst enemy... humans.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/6/2023 4:19:00 PM

Your Abecedarian is beautiful filled with a sense of wonder with nature (like the cherry blossoms) and the sadness of what humanity has thoughtlessly done to destroy the ecology. All that I see and hear saddens me.Marvelously done. Have a great evening, Sara

Constance La France

Date: 12/6/2023 7:33:00 AM

Silent, your poem is so beautifully penned and I love the image. A great example for your contest. I am thinking that I will write about winter nature as that is what I see outside my windows and it is so beautiful, nature speaks to my soul !

Ink Empress

Date: 12/6/2023 2:43:00 AM

I still need to do an abc, its also called abcedarian? I remember you introducing this form to so many on insta, and i must say yours flow just seamlessly! Every line in this is so deep and so well articulated with such poetic brilliance. I especially love the xyz lines as i know they arent easy to do. Your versatile way of writing on so many different subjects show that you are such a prolific poet dear silent one! I loveee this! Definitely another fave! Love the real talk flowing in eloquence

Silent One
Date: 12/6/2023 3:30:00 AM

Yeah this one is an Abcedarian not an ABC poem.. Thanks for spotting that. I thought I had selected that option.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 12/6/2023 1:45:00 AM

Brilliant poem. Well done.