Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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13.06.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Admit The Age -

                                               The clockwork
                                             the most complex
                                          Older sprockets, need
                                                 life cycle oils
                                                  Awareness
                                          the vitality is impaired
                                    - ready to do whatever it takes
                                     follow the advice of the doctor
                                             positively for health

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Jennifer Proxenos July 21, 2024 at 8:06 AM Our grandfather clock took 4 months in a clock hospital to get better, as for doctors who diagnosis humans, i have become a little skeptical of their assessment of us, and i mean specialists, except for one who has known our family for 40 years, reaching back to my mom and dad and then us. Letting them deal with a life death situation would be a twofold crisis! - a clever write dear Anne-Lise. Love and blessings, Jennifer.

Regina Mcintosh June 22, 2024 at 10:55 PM Wonderful writing and true. Much love and God bless you always, Gina

Duke Beaufort June 22, 2024 at 7:27 AM Anne-Lise, You have me thinking about my brain and the wheels turning inside. Your suggestion is on target....we need to take care of ourselves so we can run well for as ling as possible and keep accurate time.

James Horn June 20, 2024 at 9:05 AM You have quite a reading group. Read my latest Willi Mays poem.

Victor Buhagiar June 18, 2024 at 3:30 AM Great write, Anne Lise. Goes to the heart.

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen June 15, 2024 at 3:26 PM Indeed lovely write Anne-Lise many blessings

Eileen Manassian June 14, 2024 at 9:25 PM I can relate well to this, my dear. Tilt takes its toll. Hope all is well.

Hilda Greenhough June 14, 2024 at 12:10 PM This is a well written view of clocks and health. I smiled a bit wondering how a robot would comment, perhaps he would praise the new socket. As for me, I already have more than one doctor, some being specialists. It's best to take good care.

Jay Narain June 14, 2024 at 10:48 AM Nice portrayal of aging with the old clock. We all need medicine to survive.

Joseph P. DiMino June 14, 2024 at 8:43 AM The mind is willing...but the body says, later my friend -- time for rest and relaxation. Doctors may not always know what is best...but they are always worth listening too. Blessings my friend.

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2024 at 11:02 PM How unique this is, Anne- a visual delight as well...you have transformed well on my 4 years of absence on soup...it's nice reading you again...huggs

Yann Rolland June 13, 2024 at 10:59 PM so wise and precious, doctors are necessary when comme the age have a sweet week end

Sotto Poet June 13, 2024 at 5:15 PM An engaging poem about aging well. Anne-Lise. Self-care, medical advice, and proactive health maintenance are well stressed.

Jan Allison June 13, 2024 at 2:38 PM I can relate Anne-Lise as I've a tough 3 weeks with illness and lost my muse but i am fighting back! I think i need and MOT and oiling lol:-) hugs jan xx