Adieu To the Night

It just goes to follow, that the sun can not rise
If the darkness has not conceded its demise
But the night is a part of the birth of the day
Displaying nature’s art in a magnificent way

As sun breaks horizon it’s the end of the show
Credits start to run ... it’s now time to go
A true sunrise chaser knows just what to do
Arriving in darkness, anticipating the view

As sun creeps along it begins with the glow
The colors are intense as the aura starts to grow
The clouds are the artists defining the glory
Cumulous or stratus, they tell a different story

The sky is electric ... on fire with color
This sunrise will be like no one other
A spiritual enlightening comes over me
As the glow of sun’s fire peeks just above the sea

It grows in intensity warming my face
I feel the beginnings of a million other days
The surety in life as the new day debuts
We bid the passing night a fond adieu.
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2/16/2018

Written for contest:  Sunrise/Sunset
Sponsor:  Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Beautiful imagery, Judith. Well penned. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Lovely write Judith and a well deserved congratulations...
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March 11, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you so much for you kind comment and visit Charlie! Best, Judy
Williams Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 12:10 AM
What an awesome poem Judith. Congratulations on your win. So well deserved....Maria xxx
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February 27, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Thank you dear Maria :) ~Judy
Raynes Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 9:39 PM
wow, this is great Judy, reads so easily, and wow, just saw this is a winning write in the contest, congratulations
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February 27, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Thank you Lewis :)
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February 21, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Colorful and striking imagery, Judith. What a way to greet the new day! Regards // paul
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February 27, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Thank you Paul :) ~ Judy
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February 20, 2018 at 10:00 AM
What poetic artistry you reflect in this magnificent piece, dear Judith! The imagery is outstanding. Therefore, it's no surprise to me that it is such a big winner! Congratulations, my friend on a wonderful, well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita
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February 20, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comments Pandita! ~Judy
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:36 PM
Fantastic, Judith!! Congrats on your first place win.
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February 20, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Thank you dear Andrea :)
Pandit Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Congrats Judy on your first place win!
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February 20, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Vijay!!
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Congratulations to you Judith. Tom
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February 20, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Thank you for the congrats Tom! ~Judy
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Such beautiful imagery of the sunrise after sunset has ushered it in, Judith. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra :)
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February 20, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Sandra! :) ~Judy
Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Returning with a big congratulations Judy for your first place win with your enchanting poem of ethereal excellence.. Warmest wishes my NE friend! ~Susan
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February 20, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Thank you for your always lovely comments my NE friend :)
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Judith! Lovely poem :)
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February 20, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Thanks for the congrats Laura!! ~Judy
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February 18, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Hi Judith, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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February 20, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Thank you for the congrats Alexis! ~Judy
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February 18, 2018 at 12:17 PM
- Congratulations, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 20, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Loved the first two lines Judith.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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February 20, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you Silent One! Great contest!
Ashley Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Oh my dear friend Judy, you depict the rapture of the sunrise so beautifully. Such enchanting and enticing imagery and rich detail elevate your poem to ethereal heights. Best wishes for a win my NE friend! ~Susan
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February 20, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Thank you my New England friend! I'm soooo far behind on replies :(
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 6:52 PM
You captured sunrise beautifully, Judy..enjoyed reading your poem..best for a win.
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February 20, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Thank you Vijay!
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February 16, 2018 at 2:35 PM
- A beautiful picture to start a new day ... wonderful poem, Judy :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 20, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise!!
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