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a summer morning at the crematorium- tears dry on the breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/10/2011 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in P D's contest Brian,
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:22:00 AM
Accpe my congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Brian
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 1:55:00 AM
love the contrast, brian.. well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:19:00 PM
what a very moving haiku, Brian! what a contrast you put in here, enjoyed this-- congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:11:00 PM
Brian! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:48:00 PM
Congrats Brian on another grand win in the Haiku contest luv..
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:39:00 PM
wow, very haiku,Brian. That last line was awesome. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:34:00 AM
Really well written. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/21/2010 8:53:00 AM
This was spectacular!! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:12:00 AM
Awesome Brian- Congrats is in order here
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Date: 5/18/2010 10:39:00 PM
Perfect Haiku and a well deserved win ....
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:06:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Brian. "Tears dry on the breeze" really brought the feeling of a warm/hot summer morning whereby the gentle breeze is very welcome ...and probably the best part of this day for the people at the crematorium.
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:45:00 PM
congratulations Brian. A sad haiku picture but no one can doubt your brilliance in the form. good one...Margaret
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Date: 5/18/2010 2:17:00 PM
congratulation glad to see yours here
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 10:59:00 AM
wow..that last line is a killer LOL ..no really what a juxtaposition! Who's #1 why some one who should be YOU! Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on your Ist Place win in the contest, Brian! Very nice Haiku.....later, Jimmy
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:09:00 AM
Wow...big slap in the face- excellent Haiku, Congrats!
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Date: 5/18/2010 7:47:00 AM
Congrats Brian on your number one 1st place in Charles's Strictly Haiku contest.. a very poignant Haiku ..one we all can relate to.. well deserved win Brian.. luv.. from the "sweetheart"
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:51:00 AM
How did I miss this one?? Wonderful, filled with emotion as well as the feeling of summer! Lovely haiku! Congratulations on this deserving 1st place win!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..You are great with few words in a write...Sara
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Date: 5/17/2010 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome 1st place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles
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Date: 5/16/2010 11:12:00 PM
So much articulated with so few words... the emotion is palpable. A fitting title to a splendid piece! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/15/2010 6:26:00 AM
A unique and compelling approach to the contest, Brian. I can only imagine what such a "summer morning" would be like. Best wishes for the contest, Carolyn
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