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12/26/2018

~1st Place (shared)~ The Last Line Poetry Contest, sponsored by Silent One

my muse and I - riding on the coattails of infinity

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12/26/2018

Adieu

my muse and I - riding on the coattails of infinity

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2019 10:54:00 AM

I'm almost done with that first page of your best poems. I know this is only a one-liner but it truly IS one of your best. Loving this one again. Gonna fave it this time! Maybe it will jump higher on the list!

Mark Toney
Date: 5/10/2019 11:35:00 PM

Andrea, I missed seeing this comment from you. It's a month after you wrote it, but you made my day! Thanks a bunch! ~Mark

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/3/2019 4:33:00 PM

Truly excellent Mark! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Happy new year! : )

Mark Toney
Date: 1/3/2019 5:31:00 PM

Connie, thank you for your kind encouragement, Connie! ~Mark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2019 2:40:00 PM

Congrats on a win that was much deserved.

Mark Toney
Date: 1/3/2019 5:30:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Andrea :) ~Mark

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/2/2019 2:06:00 PM

Excellent Mark!!! I think my muse is lingering in the clouds. She likes to drift in the wind. Congratulations on this win. :) Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/2/2019 2:58:00 PM

:) Perhaps!! Gotta love when my muse does come out to play. You are very welcome Mark. I appreciate you! ~ Brandy

Mark Toney
Date: 1/2/2019 2:34:00 PM

Your comments are always appreciated, Brandy! Let me guess... The times when you produce a lot of poetry, your muse is riding the jet stream, yeah? ~Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2018 1:18:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Mark :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Toney
Date: 12/30/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Lycia Harding

Date: 12/29/2018 4:28:00 PM

This is lovely, Mark - solid yet ethereal. Congrats on your win! xoxoxo LyLy

Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 4:48:00 PM

Lycia, thank you for stopping by with your kind, encouraging comment. Happy to make your acquaintance :) ~Mark

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/29/2018 3:50:00 PM

Back to wish you congratulations on your placement, this was wonderful!

Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 4:02:00 PM

Your return visit is much appreciated, Michelle. I loved your puzzle metaphor too :) ~Mark

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/29/2018 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your first-place win, Mark. I like the image you create.

Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 11:48:00 AM

Thank you, Carolyn. I'm glad you like it. ~Mark

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/29/2018 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations for your win! :)

Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 8:44:00 AM

Heidi, thanks for the congrats and for being a positive “catalyst” ;) ~Mark

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/29/2018 7:52:00 AM

Hi Mark. Great title and content. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 8:51:00 AM

Lol... Alexis, please don’t take 1st place away from me! I appreciate your kind, encouraging comment. ~Mark

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 12/29/2018 7:51:00 AM

Fabulous line! Love it :) Congratulations on your top win Mark! xomo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/29/2018 1:03:00 PM

Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 8:56:00 AM

Maureen, thank you, thank you, thank you! Your “footprint” is welcome here any time ;) ~Mark

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2018 6:20:00 AM

Brilliant.... how awesome would that be... When I die, I'm taking my muse with me!!! LOL. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your first place in the one liner contest..

Mark Toney
Date: 12/29/2018 9:08:00 AM

Silent One, thank you for such a challenging and fun contest! I sincerely appreciate my placement. Best wishes. ~Mark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2018 5:24:00 PM

this is simply gorgeous. Is it for the current one liner contest? IF so, it's the best one I've seen yet for a final line.

Mark Toney
Date: 12/26/2018 5:29:00 PM

Andrea, you are so gracious! Yes, it's for the contest, and I sincerely appreciate your encouragement. ~Mark

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/26/2018 4:44:00 PM

Love the optimism in this, we should all be so lucky!

Mark Toney
Date: 12/26/2018 4:49:00 PM

Why, Michelle, I'd like to think that you showed me the way! ~Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2018 2:36:00 PM

- Very well done, Mark - Love this one, a winner ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Toney
Date: 12/26/2018 4:44:00 PM

Thank you, Ann-Lise! ~Mark

my muse and I - riding on the coattails of infinity

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