Adding Up the Years

My hungry fingers licked your face,
tasting every curve;
my eyes consumed your image
much like a starving child devours food.
Love-fragrance laced the air we breathed.
We were drunk,
addicted to our potent attraction.
Life crackled with intense emotion,
teetering on Cupid's arrow point.
"This is true love!" I told my dizzy self.
"A love for the ages; a love to last forever."

Almost we had that of which poets sing, 
heaven was ours to clasp . . .

We walked a while together
the path that all must walk;
in the treading I realized that love was never what I dreamed.
Love is more than emotion.
Love is tireless devotion, 
sometimes monotonous, repetitive motion,
a profound obedience!

What we found was life, 
the working side by side, 
caring,
training our spirits to appreciate  inner foreign lands,
cleaning up the dirty,
laughing through the tears,
bearing the faults and sins of each other,
nursing soul-wringing sorrow,

Living an adding up the years kind of life. . . .

True love was within our reach.

©Faye Lanham Gibson, April 15, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Fantastic write my friend and so very true. Thats the love we all should have with our spouses. Beautiful poem!!!!!! A7....
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April 25, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Faye, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 9:28 AM
I hope I too have one like this soon.. :) love this.. lovely seeing you around Faye.. :)!! thanks for the scriptures you posting they make my fb news feeds better.. :)!!--olive eloisa
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 11:25 PM
wow, another amazing one from you. This was so profound. I hope it garnered a high spot on the chart because it is one of the very best I have seen and I can tell you got a win by seeing the congrats below. WAY to GO.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Moving piece, congratulations!
La France Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Faye, love has many faces and you captured all the faucets within your words, beautifully written 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, my girl and me, actually I am allergic to Pearl Smudges but oh well too late I love her too much
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Mystic, I love your words of wisdom about true love. You are so right in what you describe as true love after Cupid shoots his arrow and makes his mark. Now married nearly 57 years, I so much identify with what you expressed in this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Love is a work of art.. it's delicate features require patience...great write and win Faye..congrats
Guzzi Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:45 PM
So very true and real thank you Faye. Congrad's on your verse winning. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:31 PM
This is so true and if only when we are young and eager with passion, could we know the truth of lasting love and commitment. A wonderful poem, Faye! Congratulations !
Lawless Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:22 AM
Faye, as they(whoever they are)say "love conquers all". Well, at least it allow us to share each triumph and loss together. Thanks for participating in the contest
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