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Addictive

It’s worst!!!  
It’s worst than cocaine. 
The purest in the market, 
Did me no harm. 

Alcohol and spirits 
Caused me no pain 

None did 
Neither them nor their friends and cousins 

None did 
Not even arsenic 

All were poisons 
But none were poisonous 

Poisonous you were 
I trusted you before them 

They came and left with no marks at all 
You glanced and I was in pain 
You came sat and I was harmed 
You touched and now I’m no more but a memory of yours. 

Please go away 
I’m already addicted 

It’s too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/14/2019 12:25:00 PM
Very potent emotions expressed in this powerful poem, U Flower! Eye-opening poetry. Love the raw intensity singe. Keep burning the paper hearts. May love light your path in life always.
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 1/19/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you!!!
Date: 10/17/2018 2:36:00 AM
- A poem that touches the reader's feelings, very well written U.F. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/17/2018 3:52:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/15/2018 11:09:00 AM
I could feel this as I read it today for I know this feeling quite well. Really nicely done.
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/16/2018 4:02:00 AM
I’m glad you were connected. Thank you
Date: 10/14/2018 9:58:00 PM
Addicted I'm in no pain, but in filthy emotion's mental train…!/// nice poem
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/16/2018 4:02:00 AM
Nicely said
Date: 10/14/2018 6:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful comparison of two types of addiction. It is incredible. Love it, dear flower. Thanks Mohammed
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/16/2018 4:04:00 AM
Thank you :)

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