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Addictive

It’s worst!!! It’s worst than cocaine. The purest in the market, Did me no harm. Alcohol and spirits Caused me no pain None did Neither them nor their friends and cousins None did Not even arsenic All were poisons But none were poisonous Poisonous you were I trusted you before them They came and left with no marks at all You glanced and I was in pain You came sat and I was harmed You touched and now I’m no more but a memory of yours. Please go away I’m already addicted It’s too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/14/2019 12:25:00 PM
Very potent emotions expressed in this powerful poem, U Flower! Eye-opening poetry. Love the raw intensity singe. Keep burning the paper hearts. May love light your path in life always.
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 1/19/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you!!!
Date: 10/17/2018 2:36:00 AM
- A poem that touches the reader's feelings, very well written U.F. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/17/2018 3:52:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/15/2018 11:09:00 AM
I could feel this as I read it today for I know this feeling quite well. Really nicely done.
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/16/2018 4:02:00 AM
I’m glad you were connected. Thank you
Date: 10/14/2018 9:58:00 PM
Addicted I'm in no pain, but in filthy emotion's mental train…!/// nice poem
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/16/2018 4:02:00 AM
Nicely said
Date: 10/14/2018 6:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful comparison of two types of addiction. It is incredible. Love it, dear flower. Thanks Mohammed
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/16/2018 4:04:00 AM
Thank you :)

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