Get Your Premium Membership

Addiction

Pills swallow what is left of me whole, Just as bottled pints drink my guzzled self, And cigarettes suck the cinders of my incinerated soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/24/2019 8:23:00 PM
A vivid and vibrant expression of raw feelings of dependency. Powerful poetry, Brendan. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Fitzsimons  Avatar
B. Joseph Fitzsimons
Date: 4/28/2019 3:38:00 AM
Thanks Susan! Your kind comment means a lot!
Date: 4/22/2019 9:14:00 PM
Great imagery and well penned, Brendan. Congrats on your podium finish.
Login to Reply
Fitzsimons  Avatar
B. Joseph Fitzsimons
Date: 4/28/2019 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Line!

Book: Shattered Sighs