Notes About The Poem

Addiction

Skeletons hang from family trees
Swinging in closets we don't see
Attention drawn to rattling bones
As memories dance and gremlins groan

Scratching an itch of dark pretend
Beckoning demons echo within
The thread of life, a toxic pin
To sew on garments made of skin

On dusty saddles or plain bareback
Monkeys ride a bloody track
Whip and spur a savage attack
In weakened moments as will power slacks

With reddened face, a chemical air
Rushes the body and tickles the hair
The stomach knots, the brain impaired 
Demonic angels arrive to share

In numbing sleep at gallop pace
The mouth is dry from just a taste
A stuporous madness in mindless haste
While skeletons laugh right in your face 


!
            An original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 6:40 PM
this was GREAT personification of it. Love this kind of writing.
Turner Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your comments of support and always taking the time to read and comment. You are very generous with both. It really means a lot to know somebody cares.
George   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Wow! Dramatic verse at its finest, capturing the essence of addiction, Daniel.
Turner Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Thank you, Elaine. Not a pretty subject but an important one, I think. I appreciate your support and kindness. Peace:)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace