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Skeletons hang from family trees Swinging in closets we don't see Attention drawn to rattling bones As memories dance and gremlins groan Scratching an itch of dark pretend Beckoning demons echo within The thread of life, a toxic pin To sew on garments made of skin On dusty saddles or plain bareback Monkeys ride a bloody track Whip and spur a savage attack In weakened moments as will power slacks With reddened face, a chemical air Rushes the body and tickles the hair The stomach knots, the brain impaired Demonic angels arrive to share In numbing sleep at gallop pace The mouth is dry from just a taste A stuporous madness in mindless haste While skeletons laugh right in your face ! An original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/13/2016 6:40:00 PM
this was GREAT personification of it. Love this kind of writing.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/13/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your comments of support and always taking the time to read and comment. You are very generous with both. It really means a lot to know somebody cares.
Date: 2/13/2016 6:58:00 AM
Wow! Dramatic verse at its finest, capturing the essence of addiction, Daniel.
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Date: 2/13/2016 7:07:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine. Not a pretty subject but an important one, I think. I appreciate your support and kindness. Peace:)

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