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Addiction

Running out of air, i see your despair. But you go Deeper and deeper. How long until you reach bottom? Come out for yourself, from those dirty waters. You still have brothers. and your true self. You cannot see clearly. You have never been filthy. You still can endure. Your heart remains pure Angie Millan-Acosta

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Ken Jordan

Date: 8/24/2015 12:48:00 AM

Hello my new friend, Angie, welcome to PS, I enjoyed reading your poem. I feel your vibe on this one, going through something similar with someone close to me. Sad but true. Stay strong, very good write. Ken

Angie Millan-Acosta
Date: 8/24/2015 7:37:00 AM

Thanks Ken!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 12:22:00 AM

Hi Angie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Angie Millan-Acosta
Date: 8/12/2015 2:05:00 PM

Thanks Linda!

Skat A

Date: 8/11/2015 4:49:00 PM

Angie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Angie Millan-Acosta
Date: 8/12/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thanks Skat!